Persuasive Writing-Healthy eating.

I am learning to write my opinion and my reasons.

30/3/17

Healthy Eating

I think we should eat healthy food.

Firstly I think we should eat healthy food because we can see better with healthy eyes.

Secondly I think we should eat healthy food so we can have vitamin A to help make our body feel good.

Another reason we should eat healthy food is so we will get some energy.

Lastly we should eat healthy food so that our heart will feel good.

So I think we should eat healthy food.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017

Persuasive Writing.

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

08/03/17

I  think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

Firstly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will be safer.

Secondly so people could feel good.

Another reason is so the kids will care for each other

Lastly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will be happy.

So I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

I am learning to create a poster with an important message and an image to match the message.

Persuasive Writing

10/03/17

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

Brush your teeth.

I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush your our teeth every day

because  you will have healthy teeth.

Secondly then we will not get yellow teeth.

Another reason is then our teeth will not get rotten.

Lastly then our breath will smell nice.

So I think we should brush our teeth every day.

My first published recount.

I am learning to put my thoughts and feelings in my writing. 
07/03/17

Mum and Dad 
On Monday afternoon I went with my mum and dad to the pools. 
First I went to the nice water. It was cool and I liked it. 
After that I dived in the pool. It was fun and good. Next I said to my mum, “This is fun.” 
Then I said, “I'm hungry Dad.” 
Dad said, “Ok, we are going. Let's go now.” 
We all went to the pizza place. We had some pizza. 
It was good pizza. It was a good cheese pizza. 
When we finished eating our pizza we went home. 
I watched some tv.