Recount writing

WALT add details so our readers will understand our story.

At Jump

On Saturday afternoon me and my friends went to jump in  to have some fun.                    

First I said to my friends, “Let's go to dodge ball.”

It was amazing. Someone tried to get me but he did not. I tried to get him and I got him. I said, “Yes!” I got him again and again. Then someone tried to get me. He was 42 years old. The first person and the second person both tried to go for me. They got me. They said, “Yes!”

Next my friends got them. Me and my friends worked together. We got everyone. It was everyone against us.  Someone got on our team.

After that we tried our best to get them all. I got one and my friends said, “Yes we got them again and again.” I said, “I can do this all day.”

It was an amazing day.

Persuasive Writing

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

18/10/2017

We should do homework every night.

I think we should do homework every night

Firstly I think we should do homework every night so we can get smarter.

Secondly I think we should do homework every night so we can achieve our goals.

Another reason why I think we should do homework every night is so we can practise our learning.

Lastly I think we should do homework every night so we can have a good time with each other.  

So that's why I think we should do homework every night.

Persuasive Writing

                    WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

19.10.2017

We should play sport every day

I think we should play sport every day

Firstly I think we should play sport every day so we can learn how to do tricks like you dribble the and pas to your teammate but you did not.

Secondly I think we should play sport every day so we can get flt.

Another reason why I think we should play sport so we can have oxtin.

Lastly.  I think we should play sport  because you can work as a team.

So that's why we play sports.