Persuasive Writing

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

18/10/2017

We should do homework every night.

I think we should do homework every night

Firstly I think we should do homework every night so we can get smarter.

Secondly I think we should do homework every night so we can achieve our goals.

Another reason why I think we should do homework every night is so we can practise our learning.

Lastly I think we should do homework every night so we can have a good time with each other.  

So that's why I think we should do homework every night.

Persuasive Writing

                    WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

19.10.2017

We should play sport every day

I think we should play sport every day

Firstly I think we should play sport every day so we can learn how to do tricks like you dribble the and pas to your teammate but you did not.

Secondly I think we should play sport every day so we can get flt.

Another reason why I think we should play sport so we can have oxtin.

Lastly.  I think we should play sport  because you can work as a team.

So that's why we play sports.

Persuasive Writing: We should drink water every day.

WALT to use the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.

We Should Drink Water every Day

I think we should drink water every day

Firstly I think we should drink water every day because every day we sweat, we cry and we do wees so we lose the water in our bodies. We need to drink more water so our body will have enough water to be healthy.

Secondly I think we should drink water every day because when you drink, the water helps you swallow your food and the nutrients from food you eat goes all around your body.

Another reason why I think we should drink water every day is because so our muscles get stronger or faster.

Lastly I think we should drink water every day because when you drink Fizzy or juice it will be bad for you and when you drink water it will be healthy for your body.    

So that’s why I think we should drink water every day.

Look at the taonga I made for my dad.

Happy Father's day, Dad.

My Father's Day Poster.

My Basic Facts Practice.

I have been practicing my addition basic facts. I wanted to get faster and more accurate. 
When I started my top score was 23. Today I score 51.
Here are  results. 

Recount Writing-At my friend's house.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

25/07/17

At my friend’s house

On Sunday afternoon in the middle of the night my family and I went to my friends house at Kihikihi. It took a long time to go there in the car. When we got there we got out of the car and went in the house. They said, “Hi.” I said hi to my friend. When we zoomed outside we played dragon ball z. After dad said, “Time for lunch.” We said, “Yay!” After our lunch we played in the house because it was wet outside. It was cold as ice outside. I said, “We can't go outside.”  My friend said, “Yes I can see the wet.”

When we were playing inside we asked our mums if we could go on their phones. They said, “Sure.”

We played the bey blade game. My friend kept winning the game. Then I won 2 times. He won 5 times.

We had fun playing inside. I like my friend. He is cool.