I am learning to add talking in my writing to make it more interesting for my readers.
At the pools 15/06/17
On Saturday morning me and my dad went to the pools. The pools are called Slater's Pools.
When we got to the pools I got on my togs. Dad got him some togs from the car.
First me and my dad went in the pool. The water was freezing. It was as cold as ice. I did some bombs.
Doing bombs was amazing. I did it again and again.
I said to my dad, “This is super amazing.”
After doing lots of bombs I felt hungry. I said to my dad, “Dad, I’m hungry.”
Dad said, “Can you wait for five minutes?”
I said, “OK Dad.”
So after five minutes Dad said, “Time to go!” I said, “Yay!” Me and my dad got changed and we went home to have lunch. What a cool morning I had with Dad at Slater’s Pools.
