Persuasive Writing

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing

I think we should learn something new every day.

Firstly I think we should learn something new  every day so that we can grow smarter and smarter when we learn  something new we give our brain a workout that helps to grow our brain smarter.

Another reason I think we should learn  something new every day is we can know everything learning something new helps to grow our knowledge.

Lastly I think we should learn something new every day because  then we would be able to achieve our learning goals.

Wouldn't It be great to be so smart.

So that’s why I think we should learn something new every day.

Retelling a story.

I am learning to retell a story.

13/06/18

Peter and the Zauberleaf

Peter was new in school. In his class it was cold and it was dark. At play time he was at the tree and wished that it had leaves. Everyday he was always by the tree and watching the boys playing but mostly he was looking at the tree. One day he went to the tree and there was a guy called Michael and he had friends. They pushed him and the leaf was gone. Peter was so mad he punched him and Michael was surprised. He didn’t punch him back. When the leaf went past him Peter ran as fast as he could. The leaf was mostly ahead of him. Peter went somewhere where there was trees and leaves. He saw a guy over there and Peter thought the leaf was at a better place. Peter went back to school. Michael was waiting for Peter and he said, “Sorry for what I did to your leaf.” Then he said, “It will grow back soon. Peter said, “Really?” Michael said, “Want to be friends?” Peter said, “Ok.” The leaf grew back on the tree. But Peter was playing football and he did not even know it was over there.

My Reading Term 2 2018

I am reading a Level 22 text. That means I am reading at my correct level.