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At Jump

On Saturday afternoon me and my friends went to jump in  to have some fun.                    

First I said to my friends, “Let's go to dodge ball.”

It was amazing. Someone tried to get me but he did not. I tried to get him and I got him. I said, “Yes!” I got him again and again. Then someone tried to get me. He was 42 years old. The first person and the second person both tried to go for me. They got me. They said, “Yes!”

Next my friends got them. Me and my friends worked together. We got everyone. It was everyone against us.  Someone got on our team.

After that we tried our best to get them all. I got one and my friends said, “Yes we got them again and again.” I said, “I can do this all day.”

It was an amazing day.